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Child of the Sword - Prologue

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1Child of the Sword - Prologue Empty Child of the Sword - Prologue Mon Sep 03, 2012 12:11 am

Crazyangel

Crazyangel
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Writing Legend - Admin

Ok so prompted by Aidan's crit and a few suggestions from other peeps I've edited the prologue. So what do you guys think? Better? Worse?

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Thanks in advance for any comments or suggestions.

Kerstin

http://www.myartabode.weebly.com

2Child of the Sword - Prologue Empty Re: Child of the Sword - Prologue Wed Sep 05, 2012 2:24 am

Pepper-Roni

Pepper-Roni
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As usual I love your writing. And I love you for taking my advice and not killing Mervyn!

Matt

P.S. Hurry up with chapter one will you, I'm starved of decent reads.

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